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About Me Member Wannabe Poet feelmesomehow20/Female/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 5 Years
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the beginning, i think.

Sat Jan 27, 2007, 5:40 PM
and i'm nothing more now than i've ever been
less, if you can handle it.
scratch at the surface until it is red and angry and bleeds
a beautiful mess, a beautiful hope
its like finding there's nothing to find as you hope to see yourself
"i'm rubbing you"
caress
your hands along my back and i flinch as i fear you'll feel me
i'm naked under this and
my skin reveals, burning, itching, festering - i can't stop scratching what's not really there.
leprosy, it feels.
and i'm looking to the sky and you stare to the ground
and we meet in between and hear a song we're learning to sing
together
only blue twinkle light to frame your face and
you say 'never' and 'i want you'
and if looks could kill or heal
or rise me sputtering and choking to the surface
it sounds like you mean it
it looks like you feel it
and i'm forgetting that there was anything before this
(how it should be, you see)
no looking back when i've got you all around
lay me down
i'll push you down again
to hear you the way no one has heard you before
to hear you whisper my name
softer than i thought my name could sound
hands more gentle than anything
better than its been before, i'm sure.

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  • Current Residence: almost heaven
  • Interests: being in love, being out of love, good books, interesting people, fruit smoothies, music.
  • Favourite genre of music: no idea. i'm looking for new music all the time.
  • Favourite artist: mary cassatt
  • Favourite poet or writer: amelia atwater-rhodes, winner
  • MP3 player of choice: Ipod
  • Favourite game: Uno
  • Favourite cartoon character: piglet
  • Personal Quote: everything is good for something if you look from the right angle.
  • Tools of the Trade: keyboard, pen and paper.

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